Hi Everyone,
In light of todays class topic (social media writing: Crafting an authentic voice) I'm posting my VOA blog posts up for discussion and review. My goal is to become a better social media writer so I invite you to criticize challenge and advise. I look forward to reading or hearing your thoughts. Thank you.
http://blogs.voanews.com/student-union/author/alexbusingye/
Posts
Google corrects Elon Musk-boosted claim that it's favoring Kamala Harris
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X owner Elon Musk reposted a claim on his own site that suggested Vice
President Kamala Harris is getting an unfair boost from Google.
5 hours ago
2 comments:
Hey!Bravo!I love your "attention catcher" with the woodwork story; and it is really nice to spin it out until the end.
Very good quotations !
But to me, it is really too long. It could be more dynamic and captivating by being shorter.
I love the end: your words about uncertainty and confidence are so right ! Your readers really need to be kept on tenterhooks until the end. So be shorter - all the more reason it is to be online...
anyway BRAVO again!
Thanks Marie! I really appreciate that. The length is definitely going to be a challenge but thats the beauty of it. Thanks again :)
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